Kebaktian Penyegaran Iman was held back then for students to freely praise and worship Jesus. It was held in GKI Anugrah Bandung. We sang lots of praise and worships. Everybody enjoyed this event so much. It was held for grade 7 and 8, the 9th grade didn't join because they are having a reatreat. the aim of having this event is to refresh our soul and make us feel refreshed with the new good spirits. Besides praise and worships, we were also told about being a good one. We were told that we were the water for rinsing feets after a long journey. But if we take it positively, we can change ourselves from poor into the one who was really worth, like the wine and beer. It's really expensive and worth for people. Then after that, the sermoner told us her lifetime. We were really sad hearing those stories, as we cried. We were told to say sorry to the people we have ever hurt, so we said sorry and cried. We promised to not do bad things again to people. Our spirits were made up as we go home and continue our activity.
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Your writing was understandable but there still some grammar and spelling mistakes.
BalasHapusYou could have done better with this article! Although you included the overall flow of events, it was not very carefully written. there were several phrases which were incomprehensible; 'our spirits were made up', for example. This could have been better with a more appropriate choice of words. In general, you did quite well.
BalasHapusanyway, your story is quite good. i can found some grammar mistakes there. your story is also a bit confusing. keep improving !
BalasHapus'Besides praise and worships, we were also told about being a good one.' good one what? a worship? i think this post not quiet good. the way you told us about the KPI is confusing. i'm sorry
BalasHapusYour writing is good the tenses too and brief explanation and very interesting
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